Egypt is one of the most important
countries in the world. thousands of years and still .The sun of tourism shines
from Egypt
.Tourism is the most important sources of national in come.Tourists like the
ancient monuments . We have a lot of places to visit in Egypt. Pyramids
of Giza, the sphinx in Cairo, the Egyptian Museum which contains the largest
collection of the ancient Egyptian monuments which competed the British Museum
Cairo tower in Cairo .Valley of the kings in Luxor which have one -third of the
world's monuments .Unfortunately the 2011 Egyptian revolution have negatively
affected tourism.But,the new regime has worked hard to create stability .
now,tourists can go to the North Coast where Alex in summer is so cool beaches fine
and sunny weather also you can go to Sharm al-Sheik , Dahab and the Red sea. Every where you go in Egypt you will have a good time.
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